Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product?
My preliminary task was:
To produce a front cover for a new school/college magazine and a mock up of the lay out for the contents page and double page spread.
This shows the final product of my college and music magazine (Front Cover) :


After I made my college magazine I evaluated my progress. Therefore carrying out the preliminary task helped me improve the mistakes I made. One of these questions was what would I change if I were to do the task again, therefore I reviewed this and worked on my feedback.
What would you change if you were to do this task again?
If I was to do this task again I would do a few things differently. One thing I would do differently is being more creative with my programmes. I used Photoshop which was a new programme for me however I think that if I used different programmes my finish product would have been my professional looking. Another thing that I would do if I was to do this task again is ask more questions to my teachers. This is because I fell behind as I didn't start asking questions until my last few lessons. I believe if I had asked for extra help with my Photoshop task that I would have found it easier to make my magazine. A final thing I would do differently is I would be more organised in completing work after my lessons instead of leaving it to complete in my next lesson. This is because I found it hard to catch up in some lessons. However overall, I think I did very well in completing the task on time and to a good standard. The one thing I am most proud of is being able to use Photoshop as I found this very hard in my ‘Introduction to Photoshop’ task.
What Have I Changed?
Firstly I became more creative with the programmes I used. As well as using Photoshop more confidently I used other programmes to help make my music magazine. I used Microsoft Power Point to show screenshots of my progress and I used Microsoft Publisher to add text to my double page spread. I also used Microsoft Word to write out my article for my DPS. Moreover I asked my teachers more questions and the feedback I received was very helpful which meant that I could make improvement early on. I have learnt lots producing a music magazine such as using various software and how small changes can make my music magazine look more effective.
Doing The Task Again
If I was to carry out this task again I would use more surveys. This is because I found the initial task of using Survey Monkey very helpful in deciding who my target audience were going to be. Therefore I believe if I had used this software more often then I could have received some extra audience feedback along the way, which may have helped me improve my magazine.
Improvements
These arrows show the changes in which I have made from my preliminary task to creating my music magazine. I think I have shown a great deal of improvement because of the mistakes I made when creating my preliminary task. From these mistakes I could evaluate my performance and improve on them.

Coloured Arrows
Pink
This shows the comparison between the mastheads. For my music magazine I created a bold font with a boarder in the background. However my college magazine wasn't made in a bold font therefore this was less effective in standing out. Also the colours black and blue suited my colour scheme. Therefore it showed continuity within the colours I used on my front cover. Even more so I placed a vinyl record inbetween 'VINYL and YEARS' because this was relevant to my magazine and it made it look unique.
Dark Blue
This shows the comparison between the slogans. The slogan on my preliminary task is not very effective because it doesn't stand out against the background. Also the colours within the slogan don't match the colour scheme. However I do like the design of the slogan as I think this matched the contents within the magazine for that edition (New students joining Wyke). Although it would not be effective if this magazine was to be published again as it is aimed at new students only. I like where the slogan is situated as I think this makes the magazine look less clumsy and more organised. Also white is effective as this colour matches the red and black font as well as standing out against the blue masthead boarder. The slogan is relevant to the genre of the magazine and fits in well underneath the word 'YEARS'.
Yellow
This shows the comparison between two pull out quotes. This is a typical convention of any magazine therefore I felt it would be appropriate to use one. Both pull out quotes are effective as they are short and snappy. However the pull out quote on my college magazine is in very large font and doesn't stand out against the other cover stories. Therefore the pull out quote on my music magazine is a different colour and smaller so it stands out but doesn't take over from who the main artist is.
Red
This shows the comparison between the name of the person in the main image. In my college magazine it was unclear that 'Emma Key' was the name of the person who the main image is. This was because it didn't stand out in comparison to the rest of the cover stories. Therefore the font size needed to be increasing larger, in capital letters and maybe in a different colour to the masthead. On the other hand the name 'RUBY LEE' was the largest feature on the front cover as this is who the main image is. This is because of the situation of the letters, they appear across the artists body and are clearly separate from the cover stories. Also the name is in capital letters and is a different colour to the mast head so it appears to be the main eye catching feature.
Light Blue
This shows the comparison between the issue date. In my college magazine the issue date was placed underneath the masthead. This is was effective in showing the audience the date the magazine was issued but I think it should have been in a smaller font size as it is larger than more important features such as the cover stories. Therefore in my music magazine I placed the issue date at the bottom of the magazine next to the barcode, this is because I have seen this in lots of music magazine. I also made it the same colour as my masthead (black) as this didn't make it stand out which was my aim. I rotated the issue date on a side so it could go alongside the barcode. This is because it meant I could also add the price and issue number next to it.
Black
This shows the comparison between the plugs. I added a plug to my magazines as this is a common convention to a magazine. In my preliminary task I made my plug attracting towards students, so I offered a free iPad. However in my music magazine I made a plug offering a free CD as this was the most common way people consume music when I carried out my survey. But on reflection I felt this wasn't effective so later removed it from the front cover of my magazine.
Purple
This shows the comparison between the cover stories. I only used one cover story for my college magazine which wasn't effective as most magazines tend to advertise more than one cover story. The reason for this is because it makes the audience want to buy the magazine if they know what is coming up in the magazine. Therefore cover stories should be short but eye catching for example I increased the font size on the word TRUE as this would catch peoples attention and in turn make them want to but the magazine. On both of my magazines I situated my cover stories to the sides, however my college magazine cover story went across my main image. This isn't effective in making the magazine eye catching as it makes it look clumsy and doesn't clearly show all the attention being on the main image.
Orange
This shows the comparison between the price. For my college magazine I made it '100% Free'. This is because the target audience is for students, who tend to not have a lot of money. Also people like to buy magazines what they are interested in, such as a music or fashion magazine. Therefore my college magazine was to inform more than to explain or make a profit. I conducted some audience research before I set a price for my music magazine. I knew that my target audience would be young people and during my survey, my audience said they would be willing to pay £4.50. This meant I priced my magazine at £4.50 as I, myself would be willing to also pay this much for a monthly music magazine.
Dark Purple
This shows the comparison between the barcodes. After looking at existing magazines , I concluded that the barcode is the one of the least important features and shouldn't be too large. In my preliminary task I think my barcode was too big so in my music magazine I made it smaller. Also commonly the barcode is placed in the bottom right corner, so I applied this to my magazines. Even more so a barcode is a common convention of any magazine so it was extremely that my magazines included one.
Green
This shows the comparison between the footers. In my preliminary task I used a quote which was related to college, however this was very long and doesn't appear to look like a footer. As well as the footer consisting of too many words for a font cover the font colour used doesn't make it stand out. So for my music magazine I decide to use a phrase commonly related to the Motown industry. This is the name of one of the most famous Motown songs by Marvin Gaye. It is called , "I heard it through the grapevine" and I felt it would be appropriate to use in my magazine especially as a footer as it is engaging to the audience.
Summary
Overall I feel I have improved on the following:
- Analysing and finding conventions of music magazines
- I can use Photoshop more confidently
- Taking different shots on a camera
- Being more organised with work
Also I have learnt new skills such as:
- Using Survey Monkey
- How to apply text to my DPS in Publisher
- Using Photoshop
- Creating a Plug
- What conventions are
- Why it is important to stick to a plan
- What makes a good contents page and DPS